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Why did he say "you (plural) sinned"? Is Yirmeyah included?
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Radak: He referred to the nation as a whole, just like Hashem told Moshe "until when do you refuse [to guard my Mitzvos]" (Shemos 16:28) 1 .
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This is like Rashi's Perush there. Other Perushim hold that Moshe was not blameless! Refer to Shemos 16:28:1:1-3.
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Why do we read "ha'Davar ha'Zeh" with the prefix Hei ha'Yedi'ah (to identify)?
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Radak: Like Hashem said, so happened to you.